Monday, February 14, 2011

I am your breathing
brought to life by your inhales
tasting your exhales
sucked deeply through parted lips
my heart inflates with your love.


Thanks to Lady Nyo for the wonderful history and explanation of tanka on One Stop Poetry form. http://onestoppoetry.com/  This is my attempt.

1 comment:

  1. quite literally breathtaking Beverly ~ loved it ~ Lib @libithina

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