Monday, February 28, 2011

In different rooms
only the TV talking
Snow is falling.

An attempt at haiku for One Stop Poetry Form- A little Tanka A little Haiku on http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/02/one-stop-poetry-form-a-little-tanka-a-little-haiku.html,
This form is challenging. I know what I wanted to portray with this haiku. Did I manage to do it?  Hmmm
 
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4 comments:

  1. rmpWritingsMarch 1, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    trade tv with turning of pages (book) or clicking of keys (computer) and that would be my house on a snow day...

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  2. L.L. BarkatMarch 1, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    I like the way the TV seems to be filling the house, even as the snow is filling the world...

    and yet, a sense of emptiness.

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  3. Brian MillerMarch 6, 2011 at 5:42 AM

    kinda sad when communication breaks down...and nice touch the silence of snow...

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  4. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 6, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    powerful highlight of broken communications.
    well done.
    signed in to follow you.

    please share one piece with poets rally today, thanks.

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