We’re all full of it
good thoughts
bad thoughts
selfish thoughts.
A head full of
curdled thought soup
I only let out
the white ones
altered to appear pure,
worn like a crown
to convince the world
I am the good witch
Keeping you
at a distance
so you won’t see
a dark godiva
covered with
white vermin.
A final OnesShootSunday poem. http://onestoppoetry.com/
Thanks for the memories.
Photo by Rosie Hardy. http://www.rosiehardy.com/
What vermin? lol Marvelously written. Great flow and rhyme throughout a very creative chain of thought. The first line is perfect, very telling and hooks the reader. Cheers, Beverly
ReplyDelete'a head full of curdled thought soup' ~ lol what a great line! But the message is loud & clear..I think we all put on a 'mask' to enter the outside world...afraid to show our 'bad' side...great write.
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I only let out
the white ones
altered to appear pure,
worn like a crown
Well played unique expression.
Are you a good witch or a sandwich?
ReplyDeleteSorry, I couldn't resist.
I really like how you've portrayed the mice as thoughts, released judiciously, and covering a dark Godiva (how cool an image is that?!).
a dark godiva covered with vermin. - perfect.
ReplyDeleteSmiles... love the crown. yet the dark Godiva calls as well.
ReplyDeleteha...nice disguise until you get them in close eh? thought soup...nice...
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