Sunday, January 30, 2011

Impressions


Watching you walk
across my heart
from the inside
your path
 the deepest
                                                                                                                  #gogyohka

inspired  by Sunday picture prompt on
OneStopPoetry
http://onestoppoetry.com/

8 comments:

  1. "from the inside"

    that is the line takes me to the deep place...lovely one shot...thank you for sharing

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  2. It is a path that just strides deeper and deeper with time...a romantic vision Beverly Ann.

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  3. from the inside is always more favorable. tight write.

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  4. Read it a few times, Bev Ann. Smooth lines and easy to imagine. Nicely done.

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  5. oh - this is deep indeed...tight

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  6. oh wow this is splendid...from the inside...deep impressions indeed...

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  7. Thank you all for the comments. I appreciate your feedback. Glad you liked it.

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  8. Tight piece... love the imagery of these yet simple words, filled with deep meanings.

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